If I were a boy. [You can check the If I were a Girl at the original post comments. TQ]
If I were a boy,
I'll ask for your hand,
To dance through the night,
Until the dawn breaks.
If I were a boy,
I'll caress your hair,
Leaving it down,
Beautifully flown.
If I were a boy,
I'll take you with me,
To my secret haven,
A place where the sun rise.
If I were a boy,
I'll keep you safe in my arms,
Wiping your tears,
Away from your eyes.
If I were a boy,
I'll tickle you laugh,
Making you smile,
Every second that counts.
If I were a boy,
I'll take you as you are,
Treasure you like a pearl.
Love you with everything I have.
With Love♥Jane
With lots of
Write in Third Person
1 week ago
1 critiques:
There is a strong sense of self awareness and self acceptance in this poem. the persona, a girl, appears aware of what she values and accepts as important as a female and what she would like the other, the boy, to value in her. Lovely!
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